Rule reminder
Mastering textual cohesion requires combining multiple strategies: pronoun chains, lexical cohesion, connectives, ellipsis, substitution, and thematic progression work together. Advanced Italian writers select the right tool for each context — considering register, ambiguity risk, emphasis, and the type of text. This final exercise tests integrated understanding of all cohesion devices.
Which revision of a poorly cohesive student text best demonstrates B2-level cohesion?